Yeah, you only have 1 product, that's the first thing the user should see. I just see text on your page and have no desire to read it. Solution: Make a little flash demo of your application (www.loopt.com ) and display it on the front page. <p>It took me like 5 clicks to get to your d/l site, d/l should be first and easiest thing to do.<p>Your top banner sucks. I don't care about the date, it fills up 1/4 of the screen and contains no information, drop it. Go to each of the y.combinator funded companies, they have decent sites: <a href="http://www.ycombinator.com/faq.html">http://www.ycombinator.com/faq.html</a><p>I'm on a mac, so I can't actually use your software.
Wow, your site is a lot better! I still think a screen-shot would be useful. Flash demo even more so. But these are hard to do.<p>One easy fix: your <i>click here</i> links are so 1990s. Verb phrases are passe: <a href="http://www.w3.org/QA/Tips/noClickHere">http://www.w3.org/QA/Tips/noClickHere</a>
Anil, I wish you all the best with juwo, but I really think you need to reconsider your feedback claim (i.e., <i>"All feedback will become the property of juwo LLC."</i>).<p>That's <i>not</i> the way to encourage constructive feedback, especially when you've cut and pasted all of it from here.
If PG wrote an essay "How NOT to start a startup," it would probably be most succinctly written as <p>How not to start a startup<p>April 2007<p>Juwo.com. <p>Japanese translation<p>Russian translation