Part of the whole HN philosophy is to launch early and iterate often, so in that spirit we'd like to present www.papyrs.com - our new SaaS product. Some feedback on the concept (or on the way we present it) would be invaluable.<p>Is it clear what our product does? Any other first thoughts?<p>PS: Inspired by HN (and guided by the common sense advice) our first product turned into a full time job. That was a big milestone for us!
Clickable: <a href="http://www.papyrs.com" rel="nofollow">http://www.papyrs.com</a><p>Overall I like it. It immediately made me think of whichever 37signals product that does the exact same thing.<p>Initially I thought the page was just the left paragraph and the 3 image slider. I was about to leave until I noticed it scrolled down -- If I didnt find this on HN I would have closed it anyway).<p>So I'd like to see you add more pictures on the right slider or replace it with a video. If you keep the slider, increase the speed! You're using 1 picture with a few bullet points, it doesn't take 30 seconds to digest that.
Looks like a great website. I just have a few comments.<p>- It took me a while to understand the purpose of the website. At first glance it seemed to be some kind of a wiki tool, but then I understood that you could also create forms and generate reports. So it's like Google Docs + Wiki.<p>- The slideshow is really nice. It does take a while to read it because the text and arrows seem to have equal graphical 'importance' as the rest of the image, so they are not easy to find. I would suggest making the explanatory text a bit more prominent (either using more standout colors/fonts, or by lightening up the graphic under them)<p>- Even after I understand the concept of the website, I'm not sure how I would use it in my company. I know I can 'collect information' and 'collaborate with clients', but I'm still trying to think of some good real use cases. Maybe it would help if you had some example use cases up there so that your users get that 'aha' feeling right away.<p>Thymer looks great too!