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What do you think of my app's splash page?

1 pointsby zx76over 14 years ago

2 comments

chrisclark1729over 14 years ago
DESIGN: It's cool and awesome for minimalist design nerds like myself, but I'm not sure if it will convert well. That's speculation, so you might want to get a more authoritative view point on that.<p>COPY: I think you need to get a little more niche on your target and add one more layer of benefits to your copy.<p>1.) Working in a small team? -- Of what? Of programmers? Of elephant trainers? Of baristas? You'd be surprise how good people feel when you call them out specifically.<p>2.) Use Xau to stay connected and task-focused. So what? I don't think anyone cares about staying task-focused. They want to stay task-focused so they can make money, or build a great product but staying task-focused for the sake of staying task-focused doesn't sound very compelling. I would personally change it to: Use Xau to stay connected and task-focused so you can...[insert benefit your clients care about most]<p>Hope that helped!
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slaterover 14 years ago
Congrats, you made a splash page! :P
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