I appreciate how fast you moved through the content. The audio seems pleasantly paced but the visuals move too super fast. Especially the section where you're 'simply filling out a profile.' It was losing me and i can pretty well guess what was happening. A typical small business owner won't have the same attitude that filling out web forms is something that is so obvious there's no need to talk about it. I'd slow that part down or get rid of it, or at least restrict it to a single static image.<p>In general, it seems close to what you would need to show to a software guy or maybe an investor. However, I'd say it's too fast and assumes too much prior knowledge of how Daily Deal businesses run to show to your average small business owner.
In my opinion, I have absolutely no idea what's going on in most parts. I'm technical, and I can see you're adding something, viewing something, and showing PayPal... but why?<p>I didn't play it with audio, because I'm hearing impaired which means I wouldn't really understand anyway.<p>In my opinion, make the video understandable <i>without</i> audio. That should mean it won't go too fast, you won't be showing stuff that people have absolutely no idea about, etc.<p>Also remember, when people are browsing a site, and they have everything on mute... can they really be bothered to pick up their headphones, unmute their computer just to listen to a sales pitch?