After receiving many negative feedbacks for my focus app's landing page, I redesigned it. I revised the grammar errors, put some screenshots, and even built an interactive sound player to make it more interesting.<p>How is the landing page now? Is it better? Any problems that I might be missing?<p>Original HN post:
https://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=30625797<p>Landing page:
https://www.space4.cc<p>Thank you guys!