Show HN: Writing my first ever novel, Diablo inspired

Link for the current state is: https:&#x2F;&#x2F;docs.google.com&#x2F;document&#x2F;u&#x2F;0&#x2F;d&#x2F;1wdSrnPEk3-xAzGY95Sfux57MJGx-Dy0Fh7yMM9hzmSk&#x2F;mobilebasic<p>Any feedback is welcome. This is the first ever novel I attempt writing :)