Hi all,<p>Just released some updates to my landing page. The interactive demo at the bottom is a pain to implement so just wanted to get some feedback to see if it was worth finishing. Any other suggestions and feedback is much appreciated.<p>Link - https://devcommerce.co.uk/<p>Thanks
> Making e-commerce sites takes time, energy, and money.<p>Started off pretty strong, then...<p>> We’re passionate about...<p>> We believe that...<p>Then you lost most of your audience's attention. People aren't interested in your company (yet.)<p>Simply swapping the order of the sentences will be a good improvement, but overall the copy could be improved a lot.<p>Try to completely avoid using the words "we," "our," etc. You should be saying "you," "developers," etc much more.<p>Another simple thing is "benefits" are much more attractive and easier to understand than "features."<p>Also the call-to-action should be above the fold and highly visible (like a bright, giant button). You can place the call-to-action in multiple places on the same page.
Top features like admin system and payment support attrat me more.<p>I am wondering what kind of custormers are you looking for.<p>For people can code like me, I haven't found out how simple the API is.