I took the liberty of re-writing the ad. Do and A/B test.<p>Develop a passive income startup
without disrupting your life.<p>Developers. Are you frustrated with your day job? If so, allow me to share my experience with doggy-tag. A startup I started developing some months ago. Like you, I did not know where to begin .
Hi, I'm Ami Heines. A 42 years old software developer. I created this page to tell you about a book I'm writing. Its about building your own passive income startup.
Building a product is tough. Day in. Day out. We struggle to bring the idea into reality. Doggy-tag was a special case, because it is both a physical and software product. Aside from the normal development process, I had to find foreign manufacturers. Also had deal with marketing, sales, packaging and shipping. It is a daunting process if you have not done it before.<p>This is why I wrote the book “Real Biz App.” It focuses on showing you how I built Doggy-tag. In it you will get all of the little talked details that make or break businesses. Since my startup is still growing, the book is now available as a beta version. Follow me along and find out what problems I face and how they are solved. If you are thinking about doing your own startup this book is a must read. Learn how I went from an idea to $1500 revenue on the first month of sales.
That is not all. Join now and get exclusive access to my business masterminds club. An exclusive group of entrepreneurs focused on developing successful startups. Go ahead and sign up for more information below. I will not spam, sell, or do evil things with your email.<p><sign up form><p>PS. Stop dreaming and start earning today. You owe it to yourself. Sign up and start building a better future.
Signed up!<p>Most programmers start-up something around the SAAS space, just because its within their field of expertise and I can see how a hybrid product + online app is a size-able competitive advantage. Its also a creative challenge. Looking forward to your book and discussion group to illuminate the product business side and how it fits in with software...<p>The page looks good overall, to the point. Some pics, maybe of the product itself or you with some customers and their pets would be a great idea. Looking forward to your updates.
Very good read. Mostly very well laid out. I like the use of fonts.<p>Suggested improvements:
The sign up form button doesn't look like a button. Maybe you could make it more "clickable".
Personally, I'd put more whitespace at the bottom so that people can have the sign-up page and final paragraph more at eye-level.
And one typo that I saw: I believe surprizes should be surprises.<p>Other than that, very interesting content. I'm quite curious, and keen to read your book.
Hi all,
I'm writing an eBook and wanted your feedback regarding this web page which I put out to tell about the upcoming book.
What do you think about it?
Do you strongly dislike it?
Let me know!
Thanks,
Ami
Interesting. I've never seen an introduction to creating physical products, targeted to programmers.<p>As a programmer, it both - kind of scares me and excites me.<p>Count me in, I'm interested!