Dear HN,<p>I humbly ask for your precious feedback for my site http://collectivesys.com<p>It's technically a Wiki + social networking site, and semantically a crowd-sourced review + social news site.<p>I hope to make it the one-stop hub for evaluation of anything in the world.<p>Last but not the least, sorry for trading your direct link convenience with my two paragraphs.<p>Many thank in advance.<p>Jerry
Dude, it's a bit too premature for adsense, dontcha think? Also, your summary of the project is too much jargon:<p>"It's technically a Wiki + social networking site, and semantically a crowd-sourced review + social news site."<p>Put that in active tense:<p>"Read, edit and publish news and important stuff. Contact others and talk about stuff"<p>Also, entries have the URL linked to the source. You might not wanna do that. I recommend a URL from the front page should go to a summary page, where people can read and post reviews, and there should be a big button/link where they can go to the original.<p>Having a separate page will help you with .. err, figure that out, I'm not sure I want to go there now that I remember the adsense ;-)