Dear HN,<p>I need your help.<p>I've been working on creating an athletic apparel brand this whole year. Most of my time was spent behind product development and after finishing a close-to-final prototype, I started planning a kick-starter campaign to raise funding for the first production.<p>Problem is, the video we made for the campaign did not turn out great. After receiving initial feedback on the video, I have concluded that it is not good enough - it doesn't do justice to the product. So, despite having very little runway (I quit my job 2 months ago with 2 months of runway to pursue this venture), I have decided to make a brand new video.<p>I need your help in shaping the story of the new one.<p>If I could get some feedback on what works for you in the existing video and what doesn't, it would vastly help me determine the focus of the new one. To express my gratitude for your time, I'll give you a lifetime discount when the brand is launched. Just send me an email and tell me you're from the HN community (email in profile). ANY feedback is welcome and appreciated. Thanks so much!<p>existing video: http://preview.yathletics.com<p>previous HN post: https://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=6213871
Congrats on getting to where you have!<p>Overall I thought the video looked good. The problem is not necessarily with your story I believe though. The problem is that the market you are entering is dominated by major players with established markets, distribution, and customer base. You will really need to show how your product is better than those. The "anti-odor" avenue may be the best angle on that from what I gathered in your video.<p>As for your direct-to-consumer distribution method, that will be a tough play in this market I think. My suggestion is to go out to some of the high schools, athletic leagues, smaller colleges in your area and talk to the athletic departments. Try to get at least one or two on board with using your product. Get feedback from them and build on that. It may be a loss for your as you may have to give out some shirts to get there, but in the long run you will gain valuable insight into the product. If they like it and it is better or more cost effective for their players the word-of-mouth will get you enormous return.<p>You are going to need to hustle the product yourself to these groups. Look at the story of Kevin Plank and how he built Under Armour into the brand it is today. Great hustle (it also did help to have some pre-established pro-athlete connections and the fact he played football at a division 1 college).<p>Overall, I think the quality of the video is good. Maybe just focus more on what is different and why it is better than existing brands/products.