I like it, but it would be more useful to skim the annotations if you displayed a title, or perhaps the first few words of the body text rather than the name of the annotator.
There appears to be a bug in Safari 7.0 that's causing every annotation to have doubled text. Thus a comment like this:<p>"Pro Rata Rights mean that the investor will be able to maintain his or her percentage in subsequent financing rounds by investing additional capital."<p>Actually appears in the DOM as:<p>"Pro Rata Rights mean that the investor will be able to maintain his or her percentage in subsequent financing rounds by investing additional capital.Pro Rata Rights mean that the investor will be able to maintain his or her percentage in subsequent financing rounds by investing additional capital."<p>Note the repeat, without any spacing, following the first .<p>Even more oddly, this pattern seems to occur for each paragraph of the original, so:<p>"
Paragraph 1 blah blah blah. Blah blah blah blah.<p>Paragraph 2 blah blah blah. Wat.
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shows up as:
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Paragraph 1 blah blah blah. Blah blah blah blah.Paragraph 1 blah blah blah. Blah blah blah blah.<p>Paragraph 2 blah blah blah. Wat.Paragraph 2 blah blah blah. Wat.
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Jacob,<p>You should consider posting the "Safe Primer" for annotation too. Also, it may be helpful to add a notation stating which version of the Safe is being annotated (i.e., "Safe: Cap, no Discount").