Hi HN,<p>I made this webpage-story and was looking for feedback.<p>http://inthehandsofothers.com<p>It reads similar to a choose-your-own-adventure, but there is more to it than that. It is supposed to be about improving upon the book medium by combining a written story with computing/music/etc. I haven't got much support outside of people I directly know, so I was wondering if you could tell me what you think, and if you like the idea.
I would put a link in the bottom of the page that gives a short explanation about what the site is all about. That way, people can easily find that information.
I think you it is better if you put a short tip for beginners. The introduction that you show after entering number 2 is long. I prefer to learn how to use a service fast and simple.