Hey there HN!<p>I've been running a startup (http://subservice.co) for a little while now and we've worked out what we need to do to take it to the next level.<p>I've sought some advice, and copied other press article's writing styles, and come up with this press release - http://d.pr/f/gQ5t.<p>But I'm certain I can still make it way better. Do you know of any good resources or friendly publicists that could help me out?<p>Thanks in advance!
Don't waste your time with press releases.<p>Use free services like HARO to connect directly with relevant journalists.<p>Here is an explanation on how to do it properly to get press: <a href="http://www.brightjourney.com/q/get-pr-publicity-startup#a-52116" rel="nofollow">http://www.brightjourney.com/q/get-pr-publicity-startup#a-52...</a>
Ben, this is a very well written PR (even if you copied the style) and I think you should go ahead and publish it (I personally feels most of the Press releases are not worth it but yours looks to be something which can be published).<p>Can you check at fiverr.com and oDesk.com, I know there are some really good people there (you need to some searching though) who can make it better, I had done some PR work myself (syndication) so feel free to contact me via <a href="http://www.inboundio.com/contact_us" rel="nofollow">http://www.inboundio.com/contact_us</a> if you need any help or guidance.
this is a classic <a href="http://onstartups.com/tabid/3339/bid/80121/How-To-Get-Media-Coverage-For-Your-Startup-A-Complete-Guide.aspx" rel="nofollow">http://onstartups.com/tabid/3339/bid/80121/How-To-Get-Media-...</a>