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Show HN: Sweetlyclean.com – Need Advice on SEO and Feedback on Iteration 2

1 pointsby sph130almost 11 years ago

3 comments

arghblearghalmost 11 years ago
Some feedback:<p>1) There&#x27;s a lot of miscellaneous info on the front page, but none of the things that I really care about. The basic info I want to know: price, what areas you serve, and what times you&#x27;re available. It would also be helpful if you had this information all in one place so I don&#x27;t have to keep scrolling around or clicking links.<p>2) It&#x27;s hard to pin down exactly why, but the visual design of the landing page seems rather inconsistent. The various graphic elements seem like they&#x27;ve been designed individually without regard to the look and feel of the site as a whole. A more specific issue is the &quot;Book Now&quot; bar in the first screen. I have no idea what the input field to the left of it is for, and when I type into it, the text is really faint. Also, because of point (1), I am far from ready to &quot;Book Now&quot; as the first action upon visiting your site.<p>P.S. On this page <a href="https://sweetlyclean.com/booknow/" rel="nofollow">https:&#x2F;&#x2F;sweetlyclean.com&#x2F;booknow&#x2F;</a> there&#x27;s a typo where &quot;Your&quot; should be &quot;You&#x27;re&quot;.
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sph130almost 11 years ago
Any feedback on SEO, the site, recommendations, call to actions etc? I&#x27;ve done a soft launch while i work on the local SEO - i.e. get on yelp, google plus etc. Looking for all and any feedback. This is my second iteration&#x2F;rewrite of the website.. almost feel like I need another major tweak. I like the look, but I&#x27;m just the owner. I like everything i do.
sjs382almost 11 years ago
Quick feedback:<p>The &quot;book now&quot; call to action button is overpowered by the photo of the girl. Also, I&#x27;m unclear what I&#x27;m supposed to put in the input box next to &quot;book now&quot;.<p>I also noticed a few UI quirks: <a href="http://imgur.com/a/OyBUz" rel="nofollow">http:&#x2F;&#x2F;imgur.com&#x2F;a&#x2F;OyBUz</a>
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