I disagree with the letter's approach even though the author says it works based on his experience.<p>The <i>best</i> template for getting a raise is something like this:<p><i>To Boss/CEO, I will be resigning my position at the company to take advantage of a new opportunity. Regards,</i><p>After that email is sent, you'll then know if the managers will woo you with a salary increase to keep you, or laugh and tell you not to let the door hit your ass on the way out.<p>If you're a superstar, you can leave and make more money. The superstar programmers at DEC left and jumped shipped to Google Inc. The superstar engineers at Lockheed & Boeing got lucrative offers from SpaceX. You'll also get bigger raises than a measly 5% raise. More like 20% to 100%<p>Now, if you're not at all interested in actually switching jobs, your options for leverage are severely handicapped. Even in that case, I recommend a different approach than the author's suggested text:<p>If you can't leave the job, you have to <i>explain</i> your <i>value</i> in concrete terms and why it's not being properly compensated.<p>Option 1: An example of leveling up the salary to your <i>actual duties</i> that management has overlooked: <i>"Since the end 2014, I've been tasked to manage the Linux server reliability team in addition to delivering new web apps functionality..."</i> You then ask to talk about market rate compensation for <i>management work</i>.<p>Option 2: An example of leveling up to <i>new tasks</i> and asking for the increased compensation to go with it: "<i>I've been doing web app here for 2 years but I've noticed many inefficiencies with the Linux reliability team. I feel I'm the right person to take additional responsibility and make the team effective but I'd like to talk about compensation...</i>" -- Basically you're being proactive about fast-tracking a promotion to a <i>more valuable</i> role within the company.<p>The 3rd option outlined by the author is the worst situation to be in: Doing what exactly you've been doing while simultaneously asking for a ~5% raise to "match market surveys" is a position of weakness. The boss responds, <i>"ok, thanks for bringing your concerns to our attention, we'll get back to you"</i> ... and then they don't bother giving you a raise. You'll be secretly branded as a fool if you don't resign.<p>Lastly, some stylistic choices on author's wordcrafting I disagree with:<p><i>"I have no desire to work anywhere else, but lately I have been getting lots of recruiters and people I know at other companies reaching out to me to see if I'd be interested in making a move. I tell them I am not interested of course, "</i><p>This text is an example of "trying too hard". You don't need to write any of that "social proof" stuff at all. If your managers are intelligent, they will <i>infer</i> this without you explicitly mentioning it. It's like you ask a girl out on a date by prefacing, "<i>I've been approached by lots of girls and I've been fighting them off but I really like you so will you go to the prom with me?</i>"<p>And this:<p><i>"Now that I have been married for a couple years, I am starting to make plans for a family, "</i><p>Do not put personal reasons into business correspondence. It looks weak. Yes, you have a family, or a mother with cancer treatments, or a daughter that needs a college education fund. The problem is that <i>_everyone_</i> has personal goals that require employment salary so mentioning it just triggers a "yeah so what?" reaction. I suggest for folks to watch[1] the Jack Lemmon & Kevin Spacey's <i>"But my daughter" / "Fuck you"</i> scene 100 times to rid themselves of the idea to put personal touches into business discussions about raises.<p>[1] <a href="https://youtu.be/55wIwwmrHxk?t=3m54s" rel="nofollow">https://youtu.be/55wIwwmrHxk?t=3m54s</a>