I agree with the overall message, so my criticism is of the writing itself:<p>(i) The writing is way too vitriolic, and centered around a single experience with a single person. I don't think there's anything wrong with anecdotal evidence from a blog, but I think OP should use more than one anecdote.<p>(ii) The argument sounds like "this guy pissed me off and was an entrepreneur therefore all entrepreneurs are dismissive".<p>(iii) The tone of the piece gives off a "oh my god, Stacey's such a bitch. I went to the mall and..."<p>(iv) What does the image of the friendly looking couple drinking coffee have to do with the writing?