It's hard to suggest improvements without knowing the goal of the changes. I mean as a resume, it duplicates much of the Linkedin profile. On the other hand, it does not really reflect the impression created by the Github profile which is dominated by reasonably successful open source projects...and depending on the significance of contributions to those projects may or may not be appropriate.<p>Anyway, it would be helpful to have a bit more depth to what 'improve' means.<p>Good luck.