Song url: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_2GT2PCUN3Q<p>Quick background on the project: I'm a full time programmer and I love making rap music. I see a lot of humor in the profession/industry, and thought it would be fun to combine the two.<p>I'm always open to feedback on audio quality/topic ideas/ways to get more exposure/etc! I am also open to collaboration with beat makers/videographers/producers!
Some feedback that I hope is constructive: Once you have your lyrics, refactor them! For example<p>"They'll talk about me like one of the greats / I'll be chilling with Bezos and Bill Gates"<p>could be improved (IMO) to:<p>"They'll buzz about me like one of the greats / I'll be chilling with Jeff B. and B. Gates"<p>Introduces wordplay (bees buzz) and internal rhyme ("me" rhymes with "[Jeff] B.") You can usually make these kinds of edits without too much restructuring.<p>Then, you might replace "chilling" with "drinking" to get a triple entendre since drinking causes a buzz.<p>Or maybe better, you say "sipping java with Jeff B. and B. Gates" because coffee also gives you a buzz, and you get some wordplay out of "java" (although maybe you don't want to!)
Dude, I'm glad, at least you are finally shipping songs while I'm still stuck in creating and deleting repos loop. I hate all of my half-ass apps enough for me to delete them
Great stuff!<p>Not affiliated, but my brother uses this to get distribution for his music for free, pretty sure Will.i.am is a cofounder - Amuse (<a href="https://amuse.io/free-music-distribution" rel="nofollow">https://amuse.io/free-music-distribution</a>).
Looks like the url isn't clickable (in similarly formatted previous posts, it has been...)<p>Clickable url: <a href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_2GT2PCUN3Q" rel="nofollow">https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_2GT2PCUN3Q</a>
my new side project: Chaingang for hackers.<p>8 hrs of manual labor in the summer heat of a southern state.<p>code in the evening hours<p>the moment you ship, you are released