Have you validated there is a market for this and which segment of bloggers that is? And that people would be willing to pay for reviews of drafts?<p>I'd imagine people like blogging for many reasons including:<p>* it's free-form and easy<p>* it's immediate, i .e. my thoughts on the interweb now<p>* it's free or relatively cheap (less hosting/domain)<p>This concept might fly in the face of some of these reasons so market need would be the first thing I'd validate.<p>Also, I'd likely want someone reviewing my drafts who has relevant domain expertise. So if I write about business, a blogger writing about celeb/pop culture may not be the best fit.<p>I'm unsure there is a large need, but I may just fall way outside of the target demo so just my $.02. Good luck.<p>BTW - Agree with JangoSteve that a 12 min intro video is way too long.