I am trying to push out my startup.<p>I just release a first iteration of the code yesterday and i am wondering if you have any ideas/comments/etc in order to make the site behave and look better ?<p>Unfortunately i dont have all the time in world so development is slow.<p>Thanx.<p>www.cygamerentals.com
1. Is there anywhere on the site you say where you're based? It's a big world. If you're based in China, I find it unlikely you'll be serving customers in Brazil.<p>2. The plans on the "Register" page make no sense. See:<p>"Value 2
<i>Two game rentals per month</i>
You will be allowed to rent two games each month time.
You can not hold more than <i>one games</i> at a time"<p>Huh?<p>3. You need to hire a native English speaker to fix the text on the site.