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The day you became a better writer (2007)

35 点作者 sherilm大约 2 年前

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Wowfunhappy大约 2 年前
&gt; Learn how brains organize ideas. Readers comprehend “the boy hit the ball” quicker than “the ball was hit by the boy.” Both sentences mean the same, but it’s easier to imagine the object (the boy) before the action (the hitting). All brains work that way.<p>My understanding was that that words are typically ordered differently in other languages, is that true? That would seem to disprove the idea that &quot;all brains work this way&quot; (although it may be how the brains of native english speakers work).
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TomDavey大约 2 年前
Preferring the active voice to the passive voice (to use the terms from formal grammar) whenever feasible is the universal recommendation of writing instruction in English, e.g. by everyone from Strunk &amp; White to the Random House Handbook to George Orwell.<p>As noted by others in this thread, the active voice puts the focus on the actor, i.e. the grammatical subject. This lends the construction vigor. The passive voice, which puts the focus on the grammatical object, is weak and even dull by comparison.<p>As well, by diminishing the actor, the passive voice can serve to evade responsibility and accountability: &quot;The campaign finance rules were violated by the senators.&quot; rather than the more pointed &quot;The senators violated the campaign finance rules.&quot; This convenient effect explains the prevalence of the passive voice in bureaucratic prose, which was Orwell&#x27;s particular bête noire.<p>The active voice is also less &quot;wordy,&quot; which improves the vigor of the style. In the example I just gave, the word count is 9 versus 7. I achieved the lower count by removing an auxiliary verb (&quot;were&quot;) and a preposition (&quot;by&quot;).<p>Now, I could have written the previous sentence like this: &quot;The lower count was achieved by removing an auxiliary verb . . .&quot; etc. Here the passive voice is probably preferred, because the actor, &quot;I&quot;, is not of significance, and may even distract.<p>The passive voice does have its uses, hence the caveat &quot;whenever feasible&quot; in the first sentence above.
rektide大约 2 年前
I need to be more observant of what writing I like. I&#x27;d love to have a pocket anyzer that could tell me how much of this advice here creates things I like.<p>I try to be much more mindful when I have real intent &amp; want things done. But so much writing is an attempt to communicate unclear things, to explore, not convince. I have a hard time believing writing like this produces the things I like to read.
amelius大约 2 年前
Glad to see it didn&#x27;t involve LLMs.
dang大约 2 年前
Related:<p><i>The Day You Became a Better Writer by Scott Adams</i> - <a href="https:&#x2F;&#x2F;news.ycombinator.com&#x2F;item?id=13953775" rel="nofollow">https:&#x2F;&#x2F;news.ycombinator.com&#x2F;item?id=13953775</a> - March 2017 (4 comments)<p><i>The Day You Became a Better Writer (2007)</i> - <a href="https:&#x2F;&#x2F;news.ycombinator.com&#x2F;item?id=13673276" rel="nofollow">https:&#x2F;&#x2F;news.ycombinator.com&#x2F;item?id=13673276</a> - Feb 2017 (1 comment)
vanjajaja1大约 2 年前
this is some of my favourite advice. once you have your message down to its bare essentials, you can riff over it with decorations to get the feeling across. I reference this a lot
paulpauper大约 2 年前
I used to think it was good prose, simplicity, clarity, etc. that matters most. Those do, but what matters more is finding the right audience that will be most receptive to your work. Try sharing a pro-Marxism article on an an-cap forum, or a pro-capitalism article in a Marxist forum, you&#x27;re going to have a bad time, or at least create unnecessary obstacles to success.<p><i>Simple means getting rid of extra words. Don’t write, “He was very happy” when you can write “He was happy.” You think the word “very” adds something. It doesn’t. Prune your sentences.</i><p>By this logic, most popular writers and bloggers not be as successful as they are, such as Moldbug. Simple , strait-forward writing does not mean more successful, viral writing. If you&#x27;re writing a how-to guide or an investment pitch, maybe simple is better, but expository writing does not need to be simple
abhayhegde大约 2 年前
Essentially:<p>1. Keep sentences short.<p>2. Use appropriate vocabulary.<p>3. Engage your audience with a captivating beginning.<p>4. Prefer active voice.
asdfman123大约 2 年前
The author of “ Win Bigly: Persuasion in a World Where Facts Don&#x27;t Matter” and a guy whose claim to fame was making cartoons about how much it sucks to be an boring middle aged man with no personality