This thread seems to be about good writing for math.<p>Okay, for some decades, I've read, written, taught, applied, and published, in total, quite a lot of math. Got a Ph.D. in applied math.<p>Yes, there are problems in writing math, that is, some math is poorly written.<p>But, some math is quite nicely written. (1) Of course, at least define every symbol before using it. (2) It helps to motivate some math before presenting it. (3) Sometimes intuitive statments can help.<p>For more, carefully reading some well-written math can help learning how to
write math well:<p>Paul R.\ Halmos,
{\it Finite-Dimensional Vector Spaces, Second Edition,\/}
D.\ Van Nostrand Company, Inc.,
Princeton, New Jersey,
1958.\ \<p>R.\ Creighton Buck,
{\it Advanced Calculus,\/}
McGraw-Hill,
New York,
1956.\ \<p>Tom M.\ Apostol,
{\it Mathematical Analysis:
Second Edition,\/}
ISBN 0-201-00288-4,
Addison-Wesley,
Reading, Massachusetts,
1974.\ \<p>H.\ L.\ Royden,
{\it Real Analysis:
Second Edition,\/}
Macmillan,
New York,
1971.\ \<p>Walter Rudin,
{\it Real and Complex Analysis,\/}
ISBN 07-054232-5,
McGraw-Hill,
New York,
1966.\ \<p>Leo Breiman,
{\it Probability,\/}
ISBN 0-89871-296-3,
SIAM,
Philadelphia,
1992.\ \<p>Jacques Neveu,
{\it Mathematical Foundations of the Calculus of Probability,\/}
Holden-Day,
San Francisco,
1965.\ \