First, lose the ornamental display font you've set all your copy in. I almost gave up reading. Setting type in apps like this is a solved problem. Google [font stack], pick a conservative one, and use it. If you want to play with fonts, do it in your headers.<p>Second, you should know that this has been done before, most notably probably by Bettween, which ultimately failed. Do people really have the problem of tracking conversations on Twitter?<p>Note that Bettween had a pretty effective marketing tactic that you could steal: finding really interesting conversations and promoting them, so that their site functioned both as a sort of Twitter aggregator (key function of an aggregator that you don't have: most interesting stuff bubbles to front page) <i>and</i> as a vector for sharing conversations in places like HN, which spread the Bettween app around.<p>Your super-effective caching engine, described with words like "query" and "request" and "server" and "cache", is not relevant to your users. Like, at all. Try to develop an allergy to describing technology. If the benefit of some technical feature you build is "speed", then just say your site is super-fast. Don't waste time justifying it. Does that turn a whole paragraph into a 5 word sentence? GOOD. Users don't like reading your marketing copy.
The front page should really tell me something about your startup. I can not figure out what you do until I click on about-us.<p>Please if you are going to have a home page, put something there other than "connect with twitter". Explain to me what you do in a sentence or two. Not a paragraph. This can be the difference between me (not clicking) and someone else (clicking) who end up (not) using your service.
This is not a startup, this is a tool. Maybe you can make a bit of side-income from ads, but don't expect this to become a company on its own.<p>Problems:<p>- Don't use buttons that look so 'bubbly'<p>- Bad colour scheme<p>- There are two different Facebook share buttons<p>- The copy on the about page is terribly written<p>- On the conversation page, I have to click 'track new conversation' to start fresh; big problem when there aren't any results, I'm essentially stranded with no 'obvious' action<p>- If I track @blah and @bleh, don't put me there under 'You', it's totally irrelevant to the conversation
Your purpose is not clearly stated, or I am an idiot for not understanding.<p>I would use the following:<p><h1>conweets</h1><p><h2>Track twitter conversations.<h2><p><p>
a short (3 sentences or less) story on how or why to use this service. blah blah ect. If you are interested click the link below to continue: twitter oath here.
</p><p>BTW how are you planning on monetizing this? Making money and becoming sustainable is my first goal when building new startups.
the ad placements really take away from the experience you're creating. build a great product people come to use, then figure out how to incorporate advertising.<p>extra thought: you have the luxury of any monetization approach you'd like -- don't feel trapped by typical display units.