My two critiques would be:<p>- This strikes me as putting the tactics before the strategy. What specific goal(s) is this trying to accomplish? It would be much better to start there and work backwards. (Albeit most likely there is a lot of important information that was left out of the article.)<p>- The other issue is that effective lobbying tends to be really difficult unless you're highly trained, have tons of practice, and have good relationships with the senators and congressman you're trying to target or else have an enormous reputation for shipping. Some of the folks you'll want to target are bat shit crazy, others are too dumb to understand what you're talking about, others are already well-informed and you'll be wasting their time, most will have all sorts of financial conflicts of interest, etc.<p>Again, it's difficult to properly critique this without knowing what it's supposed to accomplish, but those would be my general thoughts.