What do you think about the launchpage of my startup?

Get some editing help on the copy - it's got some seriously awkward phrasing. Also, I've read it three times, and I'm still not sure what it is that your company will do aside from "reinventing the world of coupons". If your value proposition is that users won't have to "pay for a coupon to receive a discount", you need some more explaining - I don't know what that means, but I'm pretty sure I haven't done it (and hence wouldn't be motivated to sign up).<p>Vaguely related: how should I be pronouncing the name? Is it two words ("vou-share"), or a creative spelling of voucher to put the word "share" in there?

<i>"We are reinventing the world of coupons."</i><p>Whoa, that's two of my "literary" pet peeves right there :(<p>"world of" when it doesn't even apply and should be left out (it's just like "nothing short of", such stuff can be chained forever without adding one iota of meaning to a sentence)<p>"reinvent" when you actually mean "improve".<p>Since that's all the info you're really given, this doesn't work for me, at all.

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and also, what do you think about the launchpage of my startup, which you can easily get there at <a href="http://binceipt.com" rel="nofollow">http://binceipt.com</a>

From what I can tell, it's not responsive.

Who pays for coupons?

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