Feedback:<p>- tooltips on hover over words are confusing<p>- [...] with projections of 1.2M (ongoing [...] - unit?<p>- "improve our to integration" - get rid of the 'to'<p>- letter itself is better written than the summary. maybe rework that.<p>- don't make something a link if you can't click it to go somewhere<p>- "Torrenegra Labs" should be linked to their site, I will google them anyway<p>- "Our business model [...] most generic option." Looks like a quote. Is not a quote.<p>- "We started this company in November 2011 [...] Today we have [...] We made significant progress during our three month acceleration period: [...]" Jumping around in timeline.<p>- Then I kinda stopped reading and started skimming because it was so unstructured :/<p>Conclusion: Nice try, but content and presentation lack polish. The text contains lots of interesting information, but seems very unstructured and follow no clear outline. Add some clear headers and restructure the text, rewrite the summary.<p>But: Nice product and market!