Version 1<p>http://cromonitor.com/screenshots/f09cffee-5b4d-11e3-88ec-002590d06c79/20131212024501.png<p>Version 2<p>http://cromonitor.com/screenshots/f09cffee-5b4d-11e3-88ec-002590d06c79/20131212014456.png<p>Which of these tests do you think should win?
As much as I like what's happening in version 2 (more description and a nice callout with dark sidebar), I definitely like version 1 better overall.<p>Arriving at the page cold, the second version is just far too dense. Having a link or two out to more info is a great idea, but keeping the main sign-up page simple is critical to users not just hitting back or getting overwhelmed.<p>Perhaps create a version 0, with even less text and more whitespace than version 1.