Copywriter here. I can't tell who I'm supposed to be hiring by reading. From the pictures, I'm guessing GigYard is a place to hire dog walkers, chefs, and landscapers. Perhaps you could be more specific on what a "gig" is? Unless your target market is musicians or freelancers, your audience isn't sure what it means.<p>The first rule of copywriting is to highlight benefits, not features. So don't rave about your powerful search that can filter by territory, hours, or experience. Say how users can easily hire skilled workers when and where they are needed.<p>Also, how is this different than task rabbit? Is hiring local service providers a problem in need of solving? Do people really need or want this?