So i made this angular.js webapp(biryanionline.ca) but everyone seems to hate it! Im trying to sell an Indian dish online i make it and customers pick it up at my house. I really need to understand why would a person not buy. I do not understand the gap, I HAVE PAID 50 for ads and only 5 ppl visited . ALL I NEED IS HOW TO MAKE IT BETTER? THIS IS NOT ADVERTISEMENT ALL I NEED IS HELP FROM REALLY SMART PEOPLE
OK, here's what I see:<p><pre><code> I'M SHOUTING AT YOU ALL AND DEMANDING THAT YOU HELP ME
BECAUSE SOMETHING IS WRONG AND I DON'T UNDERSTAND IT
BUT I'M SURE THAT SHOUTING AT EVERYONE WILL GET LOTS OF
SMART PEOPLE TO GIVE ME THEIR TIME WITHOUT PAYMENT AND
WITHOUT ME TELLING THEM ANYTHING I'VE TRIED OR WHAT I'VE
DONE OR WHY THEY SHOULD HELP ME OR HOW MUCH EFFORT I'VE
PUT IN OR WHAT RESEARCH I'VE DONE OR ANYTHING USEFUL.
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Go and read this: <a href="https://mikeash.com/getting_answers.html" rel="nofollow">https://mikeash.com/getting_answers.html</a><p>Now, I've gone to your site:<p>* I can't read the white text on the pale background without highlighting it.<p>* When I do highlight it, it says<p><pre><code> "Order in 2 minutes and it will be ready
hot and fresh!"
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What does that mean? Where will it be ready? How do I collect it?<p>* I go through some of the process, and then:<p><pre><code> It will be ready in no time, hot and fresh.
Pickup at our Mississauga heartland location
Precise location will be given at the time of checkout!
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Screw that. How can you expect people to order stuff when they have no idea where you are?!?<p>It's lunacy! And if it's not lunacy, then you need a complete overhaul of your web flow to make it clear WTF's going on.
1. It wasn't obvious to me where you are located.<p>2. I have about 3 places that make very good biryani within a 5 mile radius of my house (in a small town in Massachusetts) -- when I stay in NYC, the number is astronomical -- does anyone really have a problem getting biryani delivered?<p>3. People who order biryani online will do it from the restaurant they know or something like seamless (that has ratings)<p>So, stop advertising. Find 10 people to buy it buy networking to them -- ask friends -- friends of friends, etc. Make them unbelievably happy -- then get them to recommend others to you. Eventually, you might be able to bootstrap that to a business worth advertising, but it's not even close yet.
Other people have given better general opinions but here are mine:<p>You should make it more clear up front what the scale of your business is - so that when you say "Order in 2 minutes and it will be ready hot and fresh!" right on the front page, I can tell immediately where you serve (like a general radius) and whether you deliver, or intend pickup in person only.<p>Also, I would like to know that the pictures I see of the food are actually pictures of the food you prepare, and represent what I can expect to receive. People are going to want to know you're not just selling microwave dinners or something. The stock images you have are nice but they don't communicate much about you or your business, specifically. This is one of those places where a bit of personalization helps. The "about" page is practically nonexistent.<p>Also, if you're concerned about the way people react to the site, perhaps you need some way for customers to leave feedback, and build a reputation.<p>Finally, since you're essentially a local business with an online presence, maybe you should focus on advertising locally?
Dude, some simple things are missing from your site. From my 3 minute viewing of it...
* What area are you delivering to?
* How do I know you will actually delivery the food once order?
* Only 3 choices?
* How do I know your food is good?<p>By the way, STOP SHOUTING!!!
now i'm selling you some curry - <a href="http://home.asmallgrin.com/curry.png" rel="nofollow">http://home.asmallgrin.com/curry.png</a>