For our Startup - OvaFlow, we have set up a pre-launch site to gather interest and hopefully get a select number of users to be the core community that can influence the early iterations of the product.
We want the product to be community driven allowing customers to have a say in features and functionality moving forward as well as having a heavy community hints / tips / bug fixes forum.<p>My question is, what do you think of the term Pioneer to sum this up? Is a simple "Register Interest" or something similar more likely to entice you to signing up?<p>* To find out more: https://www.ovaflow.com/?ref=hn4<p>* For more detailed reasons about becoming a Pioneer: https://www.ovaflow.com/blog/2014/06/30/ovaflow-pioneers/?ref=hn4<p>* For very simple bullets points on Becoming a Pioneer and how to become a Pioneer: https://www.ovaflow.com/register/?ref=hn4<p>Apologies if this seems like a shameless plug, but it's more feedback we want at this stage.<p>Cheers for the help, guys
My honest assessment:<p>- I hate your name and your attempt at branding. "OvaView Management Console", "OvaFlow agents", "OvaFlow Environment". Got real sick of that real fast.<p>- I don't understand what your product does or how it helps me. There's too much text on your landing page. Also, the main body image looks terrible. Buzzwords like "Global", "Data", "Metrics" blurring into the background. And then lines of "010101010110". What year is this, 1997? A bit behind on design trends.<p>- Lastly, your users won't care what title they get. Your product isn't social, so having a label like an Ebay "Power Seller" or Yelp "Elite" does not apply here.<p>Frankly, I read everything on your homepage and I still don't understand what you do, or how anyone would want to pay for it. Any visitor to your site will spend 1% of the time I did. Good luck!