I'm about to launch a virtual mentorship project with a local startup incubator. This project is based on the standard pre-accelerator approach, but it is hosted online through my startup's business model collaboration tool.<p>(https://www.startupsoap.co/) *Stripe disabled and ads not running yet.<p>I'm a new developer and this is my first splash page (my technical co-founder is fully focused on our product).<p>I'd appreciate technical feedback, but I also want to make sure my message is clear, complete, compelling, and concise. Does the price seem fair and the offering strong?<p>Our startup needs this to work out because our cash flow has been suffering from a long sales cycle. If we can make this model work, we would start partnering with more startup accelerators and incubators so that they can monetize extra mentorship hours.