Interesting. While I made some progress
with violin, that's 400 year old technology,
and I want to continue with music but with
more productive technology, likely based on
using a computer to help compose and perform
music. So, I'm interested.<p>Suggestions:<p>(1) In the demo, make the text on the screen
of the computer used in the demo
much, much larger and much easier to
read.<p>(2) Before first using a term, e.g., <i>playground</i>,
motivate, define, and explain the term.<p>(3) Pronounce all the words clearly, e.g., don't
drop voice volume at certain words or at the
end of sentences and don't mumble. In other
words, speak right up, loud and clear so that
you can be heard and understood.<p>(4) At the beginning, give an overview
of the work and presentation.<p>So, right, (1) I can't read anything on
the screen of the computer used for the
demo, (2) don't want to struggle with
and wonder about
undefined terminology, (3) really
mostly can't understand the voice,
and (4) want to have a broad description
at the beginning to have a first-cut
understanding of what the work and
presentation are about.